L and Naomi - Death Note Edit

This are edited pages of the original Death Note Manga. Basically I took Raye Penber out of the picture in order to allow Naomi and L to have some interaction, because I adore them together.

Disclaimer: Every drawing is property of Tsugumi Ohba and Takeshi Obata; The pages are of the Volumen 2, chapter 8 of the Manga Death Note. Though some L scans are from other chapters. I was merely trying to have some harmless fun with a pairing I adore =3
If there's a grammatical mistake please point it out to me so I can fix it. English is not my native language and I still have some problems with a few things.

The conversation is kinda lame, but I'm content with it. It's pretty much based on; what would happen if after the BB Case Naomi had stayed with L in order to help him solves cases and that sort of thing? The timeline of the 4 paged edition I made is when L shows his face and converses with Yagami, Matsuda and the other's for the first time... In Volumen 2 of the Manga; so in here, after having that talk with them he actually goes somewhere; the hotel where Naomi is staying. And so they talk about it and how L never likes to show himself and blah blah blah. I tried to make it seem like it could actually be happening in the manga, so I actually ended up exactly well almost exactly the same as how that scene with Naomi ends; with her laughing.

There are 3 more pages of this. Here are the links:

Page 2 [link]
Page 3 [link]
Page 4 [link]

LNaomi is a great pairing, remember that x3

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